This dark cold night.
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This dark cold night.
We can post poems to right?
I just got banned from the SS forums. Here is my poem (it doesn't really rhyme)
I watch as the gate to the doors lock on me.
I start to cry and think "Why?" "Why did I do this?" "I know better."
I slowly get off my feet. And walk away. And start to cry.
On this dark cold night.
I start to walk to my forum home. Crying my eyes out.
I get there and see a friend. I hug him and slowly walk away with him.
On this dark cold night.
(This is bad xP My first poem)
I just got banned from the SS forums. Here is my poem (it doesn't really rhyme)
I watch as the gate to the doors lock on me.
I start to cry and think "Why?" "Why did I do this?" "I know better."
I slowly get off my feet. And walk away. And start to cry.
On this dark cold night.
I start to walk to my forum home. Crying my eyes out.
I get there and see a friend. I hug him and slowly walk away with him.
On this dark cold night.
(This is bad xP My first poem)
BreeZaps- Rookie
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Re: This dark cold night.
could take work. not bad.
YYHD- Rookie
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Re: This dark cold night.
Great first poem. It makes sense. Could use some details. And some poems don't rhyme but they are still good.
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